There isn't much that I can say on this chapter. It is cool how introducing some elements into a story can change a felt boring story into a story that I will be able to remember. Simple elements like a new character, more tension and more build up to the resolution really did in fact change the entire mood of the story and help the resolution quite a bit. I agree with the steps he used, they are very good. Somethings I would have used would have maybe been a guy that made the character jealous and not wanting to ask for help from a younger male, maybe making him sound inferior to the young student, but it was all good. The Mapping that he did on the three previous maps were cool too showing the different steps in the story and how emotions were moving up and down. Those visual maps are real good at explaining the transformations of the character in the story.
We can re-build him, we can make him better, faster, stronger...the story that is...
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